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 == Daniel's Rants ==
-Daniel is not fond of the DDRC despite their legitimite attempts at helping him.
+Daniel is not fond of the DDRC, despite their benevolent attempts to help him.
-On June 14th, 2023, Daniel uploaded a video where he begins by explaining that the DDRC "promised to pay for his studio time", which they never did.
+On June 14, 2023, Daniel uploaded a video in which he explained that the DDRC had, "...promised to pay for his studio time," which they never did.
-Daniel does not understand they are one of very few entities in his life that are genuinely trying to help him live a better life. It appears they have cut contact and that neither party wants anything to do with the other.
+Daniel does not understand that the DDRC are one of the very few entities in his life that are genuinely trying to help him. It appears they have cut contact and that neither party wants anything to do with the other.
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