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However, most of Daniel's lyrics appear to be somewhat autobiographical. The lyrics of ''Something More'' showed, although small, insight on Daniel's thought processes and struggles with schizophrenia, with its most quoted lyric being "I'm surrounded by people I don't see". In his song ''[https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=DKIBaMTLODM Grace and I Freestyle]''<ref>https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=DKIBaMTLODM</ref>, Daniel sings about his desire to date [[Grace VanderWaal]] and have sex with her even though at the time of publishing, she was still a minor. This song very well aligns with his unbridled lust for her, most notably because the most repeated lyric of the song is "sex". Daniel shows an inability to understand the mood or context of songs. A good songwriter uses lyrics that reflect the music and paint an emotional picture, which Daniel is not. This is most notably shown in Daniel's song, ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SSjmFJNj3DY Work]''<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SSjmFJNj3DY</ref>, where it's themed are seemingly all over the place, switching from being a partial cover of ''Work'' by Rihanna, to abruptly switching to sexual innuendos and asking the listener to twerk.  
However, most of Daniel's lyrics appear to be somewhat autobiographical. The lyrics of ''Something More'' showed, although small, insight on Daniel's thought processes and struggles with schizophrenia, with its most quoted lyric being "I'm surrounded by people I don't see". In his song ''[https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=DKIBaMTLODM Grace and I Freestyle]''<ref>https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=DKIBaMTLODM</ref>, Daniel sings about his desire to date [[Grace VanderWaal]] and have sex with her even though at the time of publishing, she was still a minor. This song very well aligns with his unbridled lust for her, most notably because the most repeated lyric of the song is "sex". Daniel shows an inability to understand the mood or context of songs. A good songwriter uses lyrics that reflect the music and paint an emotional picture, which Daniel is not. This is most notably shown in Daniel's song, ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SSjmFJNj3DY Work]''<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SSjmFJNj3DY</ref>, where it's themed are seemingly all over the place, switching from being a partial cover of ''Work'' by Rihanna, to abruptly switching to sexual innuendos and asking the listener to twerk.  


As talked about before, Daniel has a problem with repetition. In his song, [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcA-kXaTt88 ''I Love Peanuts'']<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcA-kXaTt88</ref>, the aforementioned phrase is repeated multiple times, lyrics barely ever changing. This is also shown in the song ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wI8Z65vfuXI STD Soaps]''<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wI8Z65vfuXI</ref>, wherein Daniel repeats the phrase ''"I got the STD soaps, that's why we're cleaning, that's why we're shovin', that's why we're coking up"''. Lastly, in the song ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaP9-M57yRs Birthday Boy]''<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaP9-M57yRs</ref>, Daniel repeats the lyrics ''"I'm a birthday boy, I'm just working all day, and working all night"'', (which is quite ironic as Daniel has worked a day in his life) along with the lyrics "It's the start of my birthday celebration"/
As talked about before, Daniel has a problem with repetition. In his song, [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcA-kXaTt88 ''I Love Peanuts'']<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcA-kXaTt88</ref>, the aforementioned phrase is repeated multiple times, lyrics barely ever changing. This is also shown in the song ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wI8Z65vfuXI STD Soaps]''<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wI8Z65vfuXI</ref>, wherein Daniel repeats the phrase ''"I got the STD soaps, that's why we're cleaning, that's why we're shovin', that's why we're coking up"''. Lastly, in the song ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaP9-M57yRs Birthday Boy]''<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaP9-M57yRs</ref>, Daniel repeats the lyrics ''"I'm a birthday boy, I'm just working all day, and working all night"'', (which is quite ironic as Daniel has not worked a day in his life) along with the lyrics "It's the start of my birthday celebration"/


Daniel's attempts at figurative language fall flat. In ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImKlInwKaTU Gang Life]''<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImKlInwKaTU</ref>'','' he boldly states "The bitch fell in love with me, pull her like a lasso, I nut on her face, turn that shit into a Picasso". In ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3UD9LpkxHbw Running From My Past]''<ref name=":0">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3UD9LpkxHbw</ref>'','' Daniel sings ''"All the sins that move against me, move past, moving past"'' and ''"I carry it up, like a past that I just forgot and I carry you, like a weight on my jeans".''
Daniel's attempts at figurative language fall flat. In ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImKlInwKaTU Gang Life]''<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImKlInwKaTU</ref>'','' he boldly states "The bitch fell in love with me, pull her like a lasso, I nut on her face, turn that shit into a Picasso". In ''[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3UD9LpkxHbw Running From My Past]''<ref name=":0">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3UD9LpkxHbw</ref>'','' Daniel sings ''"All the sins that move against me, move past, moving past"'' and ''"I carry it up, like a past that I just forgot and I carry you, like a weight on my jeans".''
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